University of Florida UK Is a Unitary State with A Devolved System Discussion

Hey there, After had a discussion with the instructor he pointed out few things

1) You may also want to talk about the iron cage of party discipline.

2) “The UK has the highest levels of democracy, where the will of the people is fully respected feature is more respected“

This part of the essay is vague. The electoral system is non-partisan, and it functions according to the will of the citizens(You need to clarify this, it is not really make sense.

3) Try to tell why British political system is good.

Expand the final paragraph more, make previous two paragraph shorter. Please do explain ‘why you think political system is the best in the world’

4) You spend too much words talking about the US political system. Please be focus on the British system

5) From the draft you said ‘In my view, the United States should take unprecedented steps of historic constitutional making to improve its political system. The outgoing president Donald Trump has been very controversial, such as issuing derogatory remarks towards people of color, refusing to concede defeat following a landslide win by president-elect Joe Biden and deploying military officers to deal with protestors of the famous ‘I can’t Breathe’ movement. I believe Britain’s political system is the best in the world. ‘ It is ok to use political figure as an example, but The argument is not solid enough. For example In the UK, Borris Johnson is somehow similar to Trump Politically.

Conversely, please try to use ‘vote of no confidence?

‘would this feature stop or make trump more obedient??